Saturday, August 05, 2006

A few recent comments from those who have critiqued the final copy (or portions of) "Silenced Cry."

"Wow, I want more! I just finished it and I think you have nailed the officers' dispositions, actions, language and mindset. I didn't see anything that "I thought" needed changing . . . you nailed it. I believe you will be hearing good news from the publishers. I really did enjoy it and can't wait to see it in print so I can finish it." R.G. Detective

"I’m impressed and enjoying the story! Your layering out of the chapters works well. Quinn’s a great character – you made him very visual. Great job. You’ve got a good story going with characters I’m interested in. The dialog is believable and keeps me moving thru the story. You’re cookin! If the rest of the story is consistent with what I’ve read so far I think you’ve got a great shot at publication."

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